Criterion

I can do this

I need more help to do this

I have written a story that includes Sunday Chutney at a school swimming carnival

My story includes other characters at the swimming carnival

I have used interesting nouns and adjectives to let the reader know how the characters are feeling

I have used interesting verbs and adverbs to let the reader know how the characters are feeling

I have used a variety of sentences (simple, compound, complex) to make my writing interesting

I have used punctuation (for example, full stops, capital letters, commas, speech marks) to help my reader follow my writing

I have spelt my words correctly

The illustration helps the reader learn more about my characters and how they are feeling